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Acronyms
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"Perry syndrome is a rare, progressive, hereditary neurodegenerative movement disorder and TDP-43 proteinopathy."

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"Affected regions of the brain in Perry syndrome unsurprisingly demonstrate neuronal loss and gliosis 1-3. Furthermore, on immunostaining, neurones may have abnormal transactive response DNA-binding protein of 43 kDa (TDP-43)-positive cytoplasmic inclusions 1-4. Thus, Perry syndrome is considered a TDP-43 proteinopathy."

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"Affected regions of the brain in Perry syndrome unsurprisingly demonstrate neuronal loss and gliosis 1-3. Furthermore, on immunostaining, neurones may have abnormal transactive response DNA-binding protein of 43 kDa (TDP-43)-positive cytoplasmic inclusions 1-4. Thus, Perry syndrome is considered a TDP-43 proteinopathy."

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Commas
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"In addition to these features, patients many have a wide array of other neurological symptoms, such as presence of frontal signs, oculomotor disorders, dysphagia, dementia, and autonomic dysfunction 1."

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Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 23:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>The syndrome was first described in a Canadian family by <strong>Thomas L Perry</strong> '