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"Sir Peter “PK” Kerley (1900-1979) was a globally-renowned cardiothoracic radiologist who is primarily remembered now for his Kerley lines but in his lifetime was famed for his uncanny imaging diagnostic abilities, co-editing the famous 'A Text-book of X-Ray Diagnosis by British Authors', and co-founding the Faculty of Radiologists."

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"In 1923 he qualified in medicine from University College in Dublin, with MB ChB BAO 5. The following year he travelled to Vienna to pursue training in otorhinolaryngology. However he quickly became enamoured with radiology, in particular that of the heart and chest. He returned to the UK and passed the Diploma in Medical Radiology and Electrology (DMRE), at the University of Cambridge in 1925. Thereafter he became a consulting radiologist to the Westminster Hospital (now part of the Chelsea & Westminster Hospital), in London, UK and Royal Chest Hospital."

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"In 1923 he qualified in medicine from University College in Dublin, with MB ChB BAO 5. The following year he travelled to Vienna to pursue training in otorhinolaryngology. However he quickly became enamoured with radiology, in particular that of the heart and chest. He returned to the UK and passed the Diploma in Medical Radiology and Electrology (DMRE), at the University of Cambridge in 1925. Thereafter he became a consulting radiologist to the Westminster Hospital (now part of the Chelsea & Westminster Hospital), in London, UK and Royal Chest Hospital."

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"In 1923 he qualified in medicine from University College in Dublin, with MB ChB BAO 5. The following year he travelled to Vienna to pursue training in otorhinolaryngology. However he quickly became enamoured with radiology, in particular that of the heart and chest. He returned to the UK and passed the Diploma in Medical Radiology and Electrology (DMRE), at the University of Cambridge in 1925. Thereafter he became a consulting radiologist to the Westminster Hospital (now part of the Chelsea & Westminster Hospital), in London, UK and Royal Chest Hospital."

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"He died at the age of 78 years from a myocardial infarction on 15 March 1979 whilst still working as a Consultant Radiologist at the Westminster Hospital and National Heart Hospital, both in London, UK."

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"co-founder of the Faculty of Radiologists in the UK (forerunner to the Royal College of Radiologists)"

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"Peter James Kerley was born in Dundalk in Ireland on 27 October 1900 3. He was one of 14 siblings and the son of a grocer."

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"Fellow of the Royal College of Physicians (Honorary) 1946"

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"Editor of the Journal of the Faculty of Radiologists 1949-1952 5"

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"Commander of the British Empire (CBE) 1951"

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"Commander of the Victorian Order (CVO) 1952"

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"President of the Faculty of Radiologists 1952-1955"

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"Knight Commander of the Victorian Order (KCVO) 1972"

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"Honorary Fellow of the American College of Radiology"

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"Honorary Fellow of the Radiological Society of Chicago"

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"Honorary Fellow of the Australasian College of Radiology"

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"Honorary Fellow of the Faculty of Radiologists of Ireland"

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"Kerley lines"

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  • H1 Early life
  • H1 Later life
  • H2 Accolades
  • H1 Legacy
  • H1 See also

"A textbook by British authors"

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"Kerley lines"

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"In 1923 he qualified in medicine from University College in Dublin, with MB ChB BAO 5. The following year he travelled to Vienna to pursue training in otorhinolaryngology. However he quickly became enamoured with radiology, in particular that of the heart and chest. He returned to the UK and passed the Diploma in Medical Radiology and Electrology (DMRE), at the University of Cambridge in 1925. Thereafter he became a consulting radiologist to the Westminster Hospital (now part of the Chelsea & Westminster Hospital), in London, UK and Royal Chest Hospital."

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"He returned to the subject in the second edition of his "A Text-book of X-Ray Diagnosis" in 1950, expanding on the subject and terming the lines A, B, C and D."

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