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Lint: posterior-dislocation-of-the-hip

Acronyms
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"An AP pelvic x-ray is sufficient to establish the diagnosis and identify major fractures. The femoral head is typically projected superolateral to the acetabulum, the hip is flexed, internally rotated and adducted. Geometric magnification means that the normal contralateral femoral head appears larger."

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"An anteriorly dislocated femoral head usually lies inferomedial to the acetabulum, with the femur in marked external rotation causing the lesser trochanter to be seen enface, and the femoral head is relatively magnified on an AP radiograph. A rare anterio-superior hip dislocation is harder to distinguish but still features an en face lesser trochanter and magnification 4."

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Illusions
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"non-concentric reduction indicates the the presence of intra-articular bone or cartilage fragments and is an indication for open surgery or arthroscopy"

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Accepted Abbreviations
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"Posterior dislocation in the absence of femoral neck fracture is best reduced under sedation immediately following X-ray diagnosis. This reduces the incidence of avascular necrosis of the femoral head and improves recovery of an associated sciatic nerve injury 4. Partial sciatic nerve recovery occurs in 60-70% 4."

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List Caps
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"Pipkin femoral head fracture classification"

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Mechanism"

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"Associations"

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"Pearls and pitfalls"

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Oxford Comma
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"The affected lower limb is shortened, adducted and internally rotated. Associated sciatic nerve stretch/compression injury is a recognised complication, - the peroneal branch is more vulnerable, being relatively fixed 4."

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Semicolons
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"Internal rotation causes superimposition of the medial femoral cortex and the lesser trochanter, obscuring the latter. This is an important distinguishing feature; in anterior dislocation the lesser trochanter is seen en face due to external rotation 4."

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There Is
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"There is no proven benefit for detecting early avascular necrosis of the femoral head 4."

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"Instability can be assessed by fluoroscopy under general anaesthesia. There is a variable relationship of instability to fracture extent, however fracture of the superior portion of the posterior acetabular wall and posterior acetabular rim avulsion are significant risk factors and may require internal fixation 4."

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