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Lint: renal-osteodystrophy

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"The bony skeleton has high affinity towards 99mTc- diphosphonate especially in the calvaria, and mandible. Beading of the costochondral junction (also known as "tie sternum") is also seen. The bone findings are usually due to secondary hyperparathyroidism but an osteomalacia component may contribute to some of its scintigraphy features. Meanwhile, kidneys and urinary bladder appear faint or not visualised 6."

Line 38:48 · Write the isotope as symbol-mass, e.g. F-18, not '99mTc'.
Units
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"The bony skeleton has high affinity towards 99mTc- diphosphonate especially in the calvaria, and mandible. Beading of the costochondral junction (also known as "tie sternum") is also seen. The bone findings are usually due to secondary hyperparathyroidism but an osteomalacia component may contribute to some of its scintigraphy features. Meanwhile, kidneys and urinary bladder appear faint or not visualised 6."

Line 38:48 · Put a space between the number and the unit in '99mTc'.
List Caps
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"Looser zone"

Line 34:11 · In general, we don't start a list item with a capital letter. Exceptions are proper nouns.
Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Bone scintigraphy"

Line 37:1 · "Bone scintigraphy" is not a recognised heading for this article type.
Commas
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"demineralisation: usually subperiosteal, however, it may also involve joint margins, endosteal, subchondral, subligamentous areas, cortical bone, or trabeculae 5"

Line 21:47 · More than 5 commas in a single sentence might make it more difficult to read.
Oxford Comma
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"The bony skeleton has high affinity towards 99mTc- diphosphonate especially in the calvaria, and mandible. Beading of the costochondral junction (also known as "tie sternum") is also seen. The bone findings are usually due to secondary hyperparathyroidism but an osteomalacia component may contribute to some of its scintigraphy features. Meanwhile, kidneys and urinary bladder appear faint or not visualised 6."

Line 38:350 · Use the Oxford comma in 'Meanwhile, kidneys and urinary'.
Semicolons
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"neoplasms: multiple myeloma, metastases; brown tumours can mimic primary malignant tumour of bone; amyloid deposition may mimic tenosynovial giant cell tumour or synovial chondromatosis"

Line 45:133 · Use semicolons judiciously.