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Lint: subpial-haemorrhage

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"contributory genetic factors, such as COL4A1/2 brain small-vessel disease which lead to defective collagen and predisposition to intracranial haemorrhages 8,9"

Line 14:49 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>COL4A1/2</em>'

"COL4A1/2 brain small-vessel disease 8,9"

Line 21:11 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>COL4A1/2</em>'
Litotes
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"trauma, especially birth trauma in neonates, although not considered to be a common aetiology 3,4"

Line 15:62 · Consider using 'ignored' instead of 'not considered'
Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Associations"

Line 19:1 · "Associations" is under the wrong parent heading (found under "Pathology").
Oxford Comma
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"Subpial haemorrhage has been typically described in neonates and infants, however, has also been extremely rarely reported in the adult population 1-3. Among neonates and infants, term or late preterm males are more commonly affected 9."

Line 3:186 · Use the Oxford comma in 'infants, term or late'.
Semicolons
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"cortical vein thrombosis or congestion, evidence for this is the observation in one case series of supratentorial subpial bleeds occurring in venous distributions 2; this hypothesis is felt to be less likely in infratentorial bleeds 8"

Line 13:190 · Use semicolons judiciously.
Commas
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"The most commonly involved lobe of the brain is the temporal lobe 7, however, other cerebral lobes can be affected 8. The cerebellum can also be affected, typically with vermian involvement and often multifocal in nature 8. Depending on the aetiology, subpial haemorrhage may co-occur with other intracranial haemorrhages, such as intraparenchymal haemorrhage, subarachnoid haemorrhages, or germinal matrix intraventricular haemorrhage 1-3,8,9."

Line 18:301 · More than 5 commas in a single sentence might make it more difficult to read.
Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 39:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>The first neuropathological case series of subpial haemorrhage was reported by <strong>Reinhard L Friede</strong> '