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Biographical Date Spacing
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"In 1954, an English pulmonologist, William Mathieson MacLeod (1917-1977 11) published a review of nine cases, and cited Swyer and James's paper 14."

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Emphasis
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"The condition typically follows a viral respiratory infection such as adenoviruses or Mycoplasma pneumoniae infection in infancy or early childhood 2-6. Non-infectious cause includes ingestion of hydrocarbon. It has an estimated prevalence of 0.01% 9."

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Acronyms
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"The condition was first described in a case report of a six-year old boy that had been seen in 1949 in Warwick in the UK. The paper was published in 1953 by Paul Robert Swyer (1921-2019 12) a paediatrician, who by that time had emigrated to Canada, and a British radiologist, George C W James 13."

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There Is
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"CT shows the affected lung as being hyperlucent with diminished vascularity. The disease can be unilateral or bilateral. The entire lung can be affected, however, there can also be lobar, segmental, and subsegmental involvement in a patchy distribution 2. The size of the majority of the affected lobes is smaller, although occasionally they can be of normal size 3. There is usually no anteroposterior gradient attenuation 4. Bronchiectasis may be present, although this is not a universal finding 5."

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Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 15:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>The condition was first described in a case report of a six-year old boy that had been seen in 1949 in Warwick in the UK. The paper was published in 1953 by <strong>Paul Robert Swyer</strong> (1921-2019 <sup>12</sup>) a paediatrician, who by that time had emigrated to Canada, and a British radiologist, <strong>George C W James</strong> '