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Lint: trigeminal-nerve-stimulator

Adjectival Hyphens
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"Trigeminal nerve stimulators are devices intended for the treatment of trigeminal neuropathic pain (e.g. trigeminal neuralgia, post-herpetic, post-surgical, multiple sclerosis-associated trigeminal neuropathies), although evidence is lacking and implantation of devices, for this reason, is considered "off label" in some countries."

Line 1:155 · Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'post-herpetic,'.

"Trigeminal nerve stimulators are devices intended for the treatment of trigeminal neuropathic pain (e.g. trigeminal neuralgia, post-herpetic, post-surgical, multiple sclerosis-associated trigeminal neuropathies), although evidence is lacking and implantation of devices, for this reason, is considered "off label" in some countries."

Line 1:170 · Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'post-surgical,'.
Commas
suggestion

"Trigeminal nerve stimulators are devices intended for the treatment of trigeminal neuropathic pain (e.g. trigeminal neuralgia, post-herpetic, post-surgical, multiple sclerosis-associated trigeminal neuropathies), although evidence is lacking and implantation of devices, for this reason, is considered "off label" in some countries."

Line 1:153 · More than 5 commas in a single sentence might make it more difficult to read.
Oxford Comma
suggestion

"Leads are implanted into the involved ophthalmic, maxillary or mandibular branches of the trigeminal nerve. Initially, the pulse generator is external, if the patient reports a significant improvement in symptoms the external generator is replaced with an internal generator, which is usually placed below the clavicle."

Line 3:42 · Use the Oxford comma in 'ophthalmic, maxillary or mandibular'.