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"The entity or closely related variants have also been variously referred to as ependymitis, ventricular empyema, intraventricular abscess, and pyocephalus 5."

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"The entity or closely related variants have also been variously referred to as ependymitis, ventricular empyema, intraventricular abscess, and pyocephalus 5."

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"The entity or closely related variants have also been variously referred to as ependymitis, ventricular empyema, intraventricular abscess, and pyocephalus 5."

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"The entity or closely related variants have also been variously referred to as ependymitis, ventricular empyema, intraventricular abscess, and pyocephalus 5."

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"Streptococcus pneumoniae or millerii"

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"Staphylococcus aureus"

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"gram negative organisms (Pseudomonas aeroginosa, Enterobacteriaceae)"

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"Streptococcus pneumoniae or millerii"

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"Staphylococcus aureus"

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Acronyms
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"Hydrocephalus and periventricular low density (which probably represents reactive oedema rather than transependymal oedema related to hydrocephalus 1) are also frequently present, as may also be the features of the underlying abnormality (e.g. meningitis, shunt/EVD, trauma)"

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Inline EG
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"Hydrocephalus and periventricular low density (which probably represents reactive oedema rather than transependymal oedema related to hydrocephalus 1) are also frequently present, as may also be the features of the underlying abnormality (e.g. meningitis, shunt/EVD, trauma)"

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Oxford Comma
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"MRI may also show layering debris in the occipital horns as well as intraventricular pus, loculations, ependymal enhancement and associated meningitis, abscess, thrombophlebitis or empyema."

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"Low Glasgow coma score at presentation, epilepsy, hydrocephalus and age >65 are poor prognostic factors."

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"There is often intense restricted diffusion of intraventricular debris, as seen in the centre of a brain abscess. Additionally, the periventricular region may also demonstrate restricted diffusion on DWI and ADC."

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