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"The condition was originally termed abdominal cocoon. The condition is popularly known as sclerosing encapsulating peritonitis, however, this is somewhat of a misnomer as inflammation is not always present 5. It has also been known as sclerosing peritonitis, encapsulating peritonitis, and peritonitis chronica fibrosa incapsulata."

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"The condition was originally termed abdominal cocoon. The condition is popularly known as sclerosing encapsulating peritonitis, however, this is somewhat of a misnomer as inflammation is not always present 5. It has also been known as sclerosing peritonitis, encapsulating peritonitis, and peritonitis chronica fibrosa incapsulata."

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Acronyms
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"tuberculosis; non-granulomatous EPS, negative for M. tuberculosis"

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"Simple peritoneal sclerosis, (mild regional thickening of the submesothelial peritoneum), is a common consequence of long-term peritoneal dialysis and does not result in bowel encapsulation, but may progress to EPS in some individuals."

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Ranges
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"Mortality ranges from 4-82%, due to small bowel obstruction and iatrogenic complications 5."

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"continuous ambulatory peritoneal dialysis (prevalence ~0.7%); related to the presence of bio-incompatible additives and long duration"

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"tuberculosis; non-granulomatous EPS, negative for M. tuberculosis"

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Commas
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"Various abdominal disorders such as sarcoidosis, familial Mediterranean fever, gastrointestinal malignancy, ovarian carcinoma 6, protein S deficiency, liver transplantation, fibrogenic foreign material, and luteinised ovarian thecomas, systemic lupus erythematosus and radiation are other rare causes."

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