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"The pathogenesis of acute encephalopathy with biphasic seizures and late reduced diffusion is yet to be fully elucidated. It is thought that there is an infective, often a viral, trigger in half of cases, and that this trigger results in neuronal injury secondary to excitotoxicity 2,3. Multiple potential viral triggers have been identified, including HHV-6, HHV-7, influenza, echovirus, dengue and COVID-19 2,5,6,7."

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"T2/FLAIR: normal"

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"DWI: normal"

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"MR spectroscopy: increased glutamine-glutamate peak, low NAA peak"

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"T2/FLAIR: may show linear hyperintensities affecting the subcortical U-fibres"

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"DWI: bright tree appearance, which can be unilateral or bilateral, often sparing perirolandic regions"

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"MR spectroscopy: normal glutamine-glutamate peak, low NAA peak persists"

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"Acute encephalopathy with biphasic seizures and late reduced diffusion (AESD), also known as acute encephalopathy with biphasic seizures and late restricted diffusion, is a rare, parainfectious, paediatric encephalopathy syndrome 1 considered part of the infection-triggered encephalopathy syndromes (ITES) group 9."

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"The pathogenesis of acute encephalopathy with biphasic seizures and late reduced diffusion is yet to be fully elucidated. It is thought that there is an infective, often a viral, trigger in half of cases, and that this trigger results in neuronal injury secondary to excitotoxicity 2,3. Multiple potential viral triggers have been identified, including HHV-6, HHV-7, influenza, echovirus, dengue and COVID-19 2,5,6,7."

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"The pathogenesis of acute encephalopathy with biphasic seizures and late reduced diffusion is yet to be fully elucidated. It is thought that there is an infective, often a viral, trigger in half of cases, and that this trigger results in neuronal injury secondary to excitotoxicity 2,3. Multiple potential viral triggers have been identified, including HHV-6, HHV-7, influenza, echovirus, dengue and COVID-19 2,5,6,7."

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"MR spectroscopy: increased glutamine-glutamate peak, low NAA peak"

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"MR spectroscopy: normal glutamine-glutamate peak, low NAA peak persists"

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"traumatic brain injury with a biphasic clinical course and late reduced diffusion (TBIRD)"

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"this is followed by a fluctuating but usually reduced conscious state, with or without persisting fever"

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"The pathogenesis of acute encephalopathy with biphasic seizures and late reduced diffusion is yet to be fully elucidated. It is thought that there is an infective, often a viral, trigger in half of cases, and that this trigger results in neuronal injury secondary to excitotoxicity 2,3. Multiple potential viral triggers have been identified, including HHV-6, HHV-7, influenza, echovirus, dengue and COVID-19 2,5,6,7."

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"The pathogenesis of acute encephalopathy with biphasic seizures and late reduced diffusion is yet to be fully elucidated. It is thought that there is an infective, often a viral, trigger in half of cases, and that this trigger results in neuronal injury secondary to excitotoxicity 2,3. Multiple potential viral triggers have been identified, including HHV-6, HHV-7, influenza, echovirus, dengue and COVID-19 2,5,6,7."

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"Mainstay of management is supportive care with antiseizure medications and hypothermia management 1-3,6,7. However, other treatments have been utilised, including immunosuppressive or anti-inflammatory therapies (e.g. corticosteroids, intravenous immunoglobulin, plasma exchange, tocilizumab) and neural protective therapy (e.g. 'mitochondrial cocktails' of vitamins) 1-3,6,7."

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