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Lint: acute-pyelonephritis

List Punctuation
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"Klebsiella spp."

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"DWI: round or wedge-shaped parenchymal areas hyperintense on DWI with corresponding low ADC due to oedema 9."

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Adjectival Hyphens
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"Post-contrast CT"

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Citation Order
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"if imaged during the excretory phase, a striated nephrogram may also be visible 7,5"

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Strong List Colon Position
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"T1: affected region(s) appear hypointense compared with the normal kidney parenchyma"

Line 63:8 · When enboldening an intro, the colon should not be bold. '<strong>T1:</strong> affected'

"T2: hyperintense compared to normal kidney parenchyma"

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"T1 C+: reduced enhancement"

Line 65:8 · When enboldening an intro, the colon should not be bold. '<strong>T1 C+:</strong> reduced'

"DWI: round or wedge-shaped parenchymal areas hyperintense on DWI with corresponding low ADC due to oedema 9."

Line 66:8 · When enboldening an intro, the colon should not be bold. '<strong>DWI:</strong> round'
Optional Plurals
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"T1: affected region(s) appear hypointense compared with the normal kidney parenchyma"

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Units
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"Technetium-99m dimercaptosuccinic acid (DMSA) demonstrates a similar reduction in renal perfusion and function, which appears as one or more patchy scintigraphy defects in the outline of the kidneys 6."

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List Caps
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"Escherichia coli (most common)"

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"Klebsiella spp."

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"Proteus spp."

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"Enterobacter spp."

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"Pseudomonas spp."

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"Haemophilus influenzae"

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Emphasis
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"Klebsiella spp."

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"Proteus spp."

Line 12:8 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>Proteus</em>'

"Enterobacter spp."

Line 13:8 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>Enterobacter</em>'

"Pseudomonas spp."

Line 14:8 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>Pseudomonas</em>'

"Haemophilus influenzae"

Line 15:8 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>Haemophilus influenzae</em>'
Litotes
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"perinephric stranding: although not considered a useful sign 8"

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Non-contrast CT"

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"Post-contrast CT"

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"Complications"

Line 75:1 · "Complications" is under the wrong parent heading (found under "Treatment and prognosis").
Commas
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"Clinical presentation is fairly specific and classical in most cases, consisting of a rapid onset of high fever, flank pain and costovertebral angle tenderness (i.e. positive Murphy's kidney punch). In many instances, less specific symptoms such as nausea, vomiting, dysuria, urinary frequency, urgency and other non-specific signs may also be present 2,3."

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"Ultrasound is, however, useful in assessing for local complications such as hydronephrosis, renal abscess formation, renal infarction, perinephric collections, and thus may guide management."

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Oxford Comma
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"Clinical presentation is fairly specific and classical in most cases, consisting of a rapid onset of high fever, flank pain and costovertebral angle tenderness (i.e. positive Murphy's kidney punch). In many instances, less specific symptoms such as nausea, vomiting, dysuria, urinary frequency, urgency and other non-specific signs may also be present 2,3."

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"CT is a sensitive modality for evaluation of the renal tract, able to assess for renal calculi, gas, perfusion defects, collections and obstruction. Unfortunately, it does have a significant radiation burden and should be used sparingly, especially in young patients."

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"Patients should be treated with antibiotics, analgesia and antipyretics 10. Empirical antibiotics should be commenced initially and adjusted accordingly to urine culture results. Most patients respond rapidly to appropriate oral antibiotic therapy, and often no imaging whatsoever is required. IV antibiotics are reserved for complicated cases of acute pyelonephritis."

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"renal infarction, necrosis and scarring"

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There Is
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"There is usually no need for a three or four phase CT IVP (CT urography). A single 45-90 second post-contrast scan usually suffices, although clinical acumen may be necessary to choose the best contrast phase 2,7. For example, if renal colic is suspected then a non-contrast scan is often required to assess for renal calculi. If renal ischaemia is suspected then an arterial scan (15-25 seconds) is ideal to assess perfusion 7."

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Semicolons
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"the periphery of the cortex is also affected, helpful in distinguishing acute pyelonephritis from a renal infarct (which tends to spare the periphery; the so-called 'rim sign')"

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