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There Is
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"Regarding staging, nearly 79% of the cases are localised, 12% are regional and 5% present with distant disease 1. There are several management options for prostate cancer, including active surveillance, radical prostatectomy and radiation therapy (external beam and brachytherapy)."

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Commas
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"Nonetheless, several reports describe symptomatic presentation with haematuria, flank and back pain, chest pain, acute myocardial infarction, acute cardiac dysrhythmia and testicular swelling 4-9,11."

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Oxford Comma
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"Nonetheless, several reports describe symptomatic presentation with haematuria, flank and back pain, chest pain, acute myocardial infarction, acute cardiac dysrhythmia and testicular swelling 4-9,11."

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