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"Carotid webs have had many different names in the literature, including carotid intimal variant fibromuscular dysplasia, carotid weblike formations or septa, carotid pseudovalvular folds, carotid shelves, carotid diaphragms, and thrombotic carotid megabulbs 10. "Carotid web" is the most widely used description 10."

Line 3:76 · Generally, don't use bold in text: '<strong>carotid intimal variant fibromuscular dysplasia</strong>'

"Carotid webs have had many different names in the literature, including carotid intimal variant fibromuscular dysplasia, carotid weblike formations or septa, carotid pseudovalvular folds, carotid shelves, carotid diaphragms, and thrombotic carotid megabulbs 10. "Carotid web" is the most widely used description 10."

Line 3:142 · Generally, don't use bold in text: '<strong>carotid weblike formations</strong>'

"Carotid webs have had many different names in the literature, including carotid intimal variant fibromuscular dysplasia, carotid weblike formations or septa, carotid pseudovalvular folds, carotid shelves, carotid diaphragms, and thrombotic carotid megabulbs 10. "Carotid web" is the most widely used description 10."

Line 3:189 · Generally, don't use bold in text: '<strong>septa</strong>'

"Carotid webs have had many different names in the literature, including carotid intimal variant fibromuscular dysplasia, carotid weblike formations or septa, carotid pseudovalvular folds, carotid shelves, carotid diaphragms, and thrombotic carotid megabulbs 10. "Carotid web" is the most widely used description 10."

Line 3:213 · Generally, don't use bold in text: '<strong>carotid pseudovalvular folds</strong>'

"Carotid webs have had many different names in the literature, including carotid intimal variant fibromuscular dysplasia, carotid weblike formations or septa, carotid pseudovalvular folds, carotid shelves, carotid diaphragms, and thrombotic carotid megabulbs 10. "Carotid web" is the most widely used description 10."

Line 3:260 · Generally, don't use bold in text: '<strong>carotid shelves</strong>'

"Carotid webs have had many different names in the literature, including carotid intimal variant fibromuscular dysplasia, carotid weblike formations or septa, carotid pseudovalvular folds, carotid shelves, carotid diaphragms, and thrombotic carotid megabulbs 10. "Carotid web" is the most widely used description 10."

Line 3:294 · Generally, don't use bold in text: '<strong>carotid diaphragms</strong>'

"Carotid webs have had many different names in the literature, including carotid intimal variant fibromuscular dysplasia, carotid weblike formations or septa, carotid pseudovalvular folds, carotid shelves, carotid diaphragms, and thrombotic carotid megabulbs 10. "Carotid web" is the most widely used description 10."

Line 3:335 · Generally, don't use bold in text: '<strong>thrombotic carotid megabulbs</strong>'
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"Carotid webs may be detectable as echogenic lesions on routine carotid Doppler ultrasound 4,5,10, but this imaging modality is not considered to be as reliable as CT angiography, MR angiography or DSA 2,5,10. There may or may not be haemodynamically significant stenosis accompanying a carotid web 4,5,10."

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"Carotid webs have had many different names in the literature, including carotid intimal variant fibromuscular dysplasia, carotid weblike formations or septa, carotid pseudovalvular folds, carotid shelves, carotid diaphragms, and thrombotic carotid megabulbs 10. "Carotid web" is the most widely used description 10."

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"Carotid webs may be detectable as echogenic lesions on routine carotid Doppler ultrasound 4,5,10, but this imaging modality is not considered to be as reliable as CT angiography, MR angiography or DSA 2,5,10. There may or may not be haemodynamically significant stenosis accompanying a carotid web 4,5,10."

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"CT angiography is most commonly used to detect and evaluate carotid webs 1-3,5,6,10. In particular, thin axial and oblique sagittal views are most useful 1-3,5,6,10. Radiographically, carotid webs are typically described as shelf-like, linear, thin, smooth filling defects, located along the posterior wall of the internal carotid artery bulb, just beyond the carotid bifurcation 1-3,5,6,10."

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"History and etymology"

Line 24:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>The first description was in 1968 by <strong>Rainer</strong>, et al. <sup>8</sup>, although the term 'web' was first used in 1973 by <strong>Momose</strong> '