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"Given the risk of ischaemic stroke, patients with CRAO should be referred for urgent evaluation at a stroke centre. This evaluation may include include blood tests as well as imaging of the brain (MRI), carotid arteries (CTA, MRA, or Doppler US), and heart (echocardiography)."

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Acronyms
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"Given the risk of ischaemic stroke, patients with CRAO should be referred for urgent evaluation at a stroke centre. This evaluation may include include blood tests as well as imaging of the brain (MRI), carotid arteries (CTA, MRA, or Doppler US), and heart (echocardiography)."

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Associations"

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Semicolons
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"Characteristically, central retinal artery occlusion presents with a painless, sudden onset, monocular loss of vision, which is often complete; patients often report a recent history of amaurosis fugax 4. In a small percentage of patients the pathology is bilateral i.e. both retinal arteries are occluded simultaneously 5."

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"carotid emboli (e.g. from internal carotid artery stenosis)"

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"cardiac emboli (e.g. atrial fibrillation)"

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"atheroma within the central retinal artery (e.g. in patients with risk factors such as diabetes mellitus, hypertension, smoking, etc.)"

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