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Lint: crowned-dens-syndrome

Acronyms
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"Although the pathology is very similar, crowned dens syndrome should not be confused with calcific tendinitis of the longus colli muscles (also due to HADD)."

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"Crowned dens syndrome is typically encountered in elderly patients (same demographics as CPPD and HADD elsewhere, e.g. Milwaukee shoulder syndrome)."

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"It typically presents with the combination of localised pain at the base of skull/back of the neck, resulting in neck stiffness, and systemic evidence of inflammation such as fever and raised inflammatory markers (e.g. ESR, CRP, WCC) 1,2,4."

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"It typically presents with the combination of localised pain at the base of skull/back of the neck, resulting in neck stiffness, and systemic evidence of inflammation such as fever and raised inflammatory markers (e.g. ESR, CRP, WCC) 1,2,4."

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Emphasis
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"The condition, and term "crowned dens syndrome" were first described in 1985 by Bouvet et al. 3."

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"It typically presents with the combination of localised pain at the base of skull/back of the neck, resulting in neck stiffness, and systemic evidence of inflammation such as fever and raised inflammatory markers (e.g. ESR, CRP, WCC) 1,2,4."

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"There is usually soft tissue thickening which is non-enhancing 4."

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