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"While this classical definition of DWM remains true and is well established, borderline cases that don't fully meet these criteria have led to a confusing array of terminology in the literature, including Dandy-Walker variant, spectrum, complex and continuum."

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Adjectival Hyphens
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"Note that this modernised definition of DWM does not mandate the presence of posterior fossa enlargement or torcular-lambdoid inversion to make the diagnosis. The size of the posterior fossa has been shown to be an inaccurate discriminator between DWM and its mimics in both the pre- and post-natal setting, as has the location of the torcula prenatally 2."

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"Note that this modernised definition of DWM does not mandate the presence of posterior fossa enlargement or torcular-lambdoid inversion to make the diagnosis. The size of the posterior fossa has been shown to be an inaccurate discriminator between DWM and its mimics in both the pre- and post-natal setting, as has the location of the torcula prenatally 2."

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Headings Spacing
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"Epidemiology "

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Strong List Colon Position
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"non-syndromic CNS: in ~70% of cases other CNS abnormalities are present, including"

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"non-syndromic non-CNS: found in ~25% of patients"

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"The condition now known as Dandy-Walker malformation was first described by English surgeon John Bland-Sutton (1855-1936) in 1887 14. It was later characterised by American neurosurgeon Walter Edward Dandy (1886-1946) and paediatrician Kenneth Blackfan (18831941) in 1914 5 and was further described in detail by another American neurosurgeon Arthur Earl Walker (1907-1995) in 1942 6. The condition was first referred to as 'The Dandy-Walker Syndrome' by German psychiatrist Clemens Ernst Benda (1898-1975) in 1954 15."

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Acronyms
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"cisterna magna measures >10 mm in AP dimension in the transverse plane on fetal ultrasound (normally"

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List Caps
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"Blake pouch cyst"

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Epidemiology "

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"Associations"

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Oxford Comma
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"While this classical definition of DWM remains true and is well established, borderline cases that don't fully meet these criteria have led to a confusing array of terminology in the literature, including Dandy-Walker variant, spectrum, complex and continuum."

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Parentheses
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"The condition now known as Dandy-Walker malformation was first described by English surgeon John Bland-Sutton (1855-1936) in 1887 14. It was later characterised by American neurosurgeon Walter Edward Dandy (1886-1946) and paediatrician Kenneth Blackfan (1883–1941) in 1914 5 and was further described in detail by another American neurosurgeon Arthur Earl Walker (1907-1995) in 1942 6. The condition was first referred to as 'The Dandy-Walker Syndrome' by German psychiatrist Clemens Ernst Benda (1898-1975) in 1954 15."

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Semicolons
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"the tela choroidea/choroid plexus is displaced superomedially to lie beneath an otherwise normal vermis; in DWM, the tela choroidea/choroid plexus is displaced inferolaterally 4,16"

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