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Lint: inorganic-dust

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"The commonest inhaled dusts that cause disease are asbestos, silica and coal dust. However, the inhalation of dust or fumes from other compounds such as aluminium, beryllium, cadmium, cobalt, copper, iron, mercury, and nickel can also cause lung disease."

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"The commonest inhaled dusts that cause disease are asbestos, silica and coal dust. However, the inhalation of dust or fumes from other compounds such as aluminium, beryllium, cadmium, cobalt, copper, iron, mercury, and nickel can also cause lung disease."

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