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Adjectival Hyphens
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"limits of conventional MRI technique: it is less sensitive to the associated diffuse damage in normal-appearing white matter.5 In fact, normal-appearing white matter in post-mortem studies of patients with MS - despite retaining myelin - often exhibits chronic injury.6 Advanced MRI techniques such as diffusion tensor imaging (DTI) has shown promise as more specific."

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List Punctuation
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"limits of conventional MRI technique: it is less sensitive to the associated diffuse damage in normal-appearing white matter.5 In fact, normal-appearing white matter in post-mortem studies of patients with MS - despite retaining myelin - often exhibits chronic injury.6 Advanced MRI techniques such as diffusion tensor imaging (DTI) has shown promise as more specific."

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Strong
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"epidemiology"

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"presentation"

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"clinically isolated syndrome (CIS); isolated neurological deficit with a solitary plaque on imaging; progression to MS is not certain"

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"relapsing-remitting (RRMS); 70% of cases; on-off periods of symptoms with a full resolution in between flares"

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"relapsing-remitting (RRMS); 70% of cases; on-off periods of symptoms with a full resolution in between flares"

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"secondary progressive (SPMS); progression of symptoms in RRMS with the deterioration of baseline functioning"

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"primary progressive (PPMS); progressive deterioration from diagnosis; little or no remission"

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"pathophysiology"

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"investigation"

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"treatment"

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"role of imaging"

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"radiographic features"

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Litotes
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"clinically isolated syndrome (CIS); isolated neurological deficit with a solitary plaque on imaging; progression to MS is not certain"

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Acronyms
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"relapsing-remitting (RRMS); 70% of cases; on-off periods of symptoms with a full resolution in between flares"

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"secondary progressive (SPMS); progression of symptoms in RRMS with the deterioration of baseline functioning"

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"secondary progressive (SPMS); progression of symptoms in RRMS with the deterioration of baseline functioning"

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"primary progressive (PPMS); progressive deterioration from diagnosis; little or no remission"

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EG List And
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"lesions may occur throughout the CNS and be found in a variety of locations, e.g. juxtacortical, brainstem, cerebellum, or spinal cord (also part of the CNS)"

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Reference article
  • H1 Summary
  • H1 Role of imaging
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H1 See also

"This is a basic article for medical students and other non-radiologists"

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"Imaging"

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Semicolons
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"This is a summary article; read more in our article on multiple sclerosis."

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"clinically isolated syndrome (CIS); isolated neurological deficit with a solitary plaque on imaging; progression to MS is not certain"

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"clinically isolated syndrome (CIS); isolated neurological deficit with a solitary plaque on imaging; progression to MS is not certain"

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"relapsing-remitting (RRMS); 70% of cases; on-off periods of symptoms with a full resolution in between flares"

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"secondary progressive (SPMS); progression of symptoms in RRMS with the deterioration of baseline functioning"

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"primary progressive (PPMS); progressive deterioration from diagnosis; little or no remission"

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"primary progressive (PPMS); progressive deterioration from diagnosis; little or no remission"

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