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"Pleurisy typically presents as pleuritic pain, described as sharp. Classically, pleuritic pain is exacerbated by any action that involves vigorous inspiration/expiration, e.g., sneezing, laughing, coughing, or deep breathing. Chest wall tenderness may be present. Occasionally, a pleural rub can be heard. Other signs and symptoms will depend on the underlying aetiology."

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"Pleurisy typically presents as pleuritic pain, described as sharp. Classically, pleuritic pain is exacerbated by any action that involves vigorous inspiration/expiration, e.g., sneezing, laughing, coughing, or deep breathing. Chest wall tenderness may be present. Occasionally, a pleural rub can be heard. Other signs and symptoms will depend on the underlying aetiology."

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"viruses: many, e.g. adenovirus, coxsackie, cytomegalovirus, Epstein-Barr virus, influenza, mumps"

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"amiodarone, bleomycin, bromocriptine, cyclophosphamide, methotrexate, methysergide, minoxidil, mitomycin, oxyprenolol, practolol, procarbazine"

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