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Lint: septo-optic-dysplasia-1

Strong
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"sometimes referred to as septo-optic dysplasia plus 8"

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List Caps
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"Chiari 2 malformation 8"

Line 44:11 · In general, we don't start a list item with a capital letter. Exceptions are proper nouns.
There Is
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"Septo-optic dysplasia has an estimated prevalence of ~1:50,000. There is no recognised gender predilection."

Line 3:68 · Don't start a sentence with 'There is'.
Recency
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"The abnormality develops during 4th-6th weeks of gestation, during early forebrain development. The exact aetiology is unknown, with an underlying genetic defect currently accounting for"

Line 48:195 · Avoid describing evidence as recent; give a date instead: 'currently'.
Oxford Comma
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"All imaging modalities that can visualise the septum pellucidum (ultrasound, CT and MRI) will detect its absence in septo-optic dysplasia. Some additional modality dependent features may also be visible."

Line 50:69 · Use the Oxford comma in 'ultrasound, CT and MRI'.

"The management of septo-optic dysplasia requires a multidisciplinary team to assess and treat for hormonal imbalance, loss of vision, autism and obesity 9."

Line 62:130 · Use the Oxford comma in 'vision, autism and obesity'.