Line 9:8·Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'hemi-,'.
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"This article focuses on the specific features related to superior sagittal sinus thrombosis; please refer to the dural venous sinus thrombosis article for a general discussion."