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Lint: total-pelvic-exenteration-1

Oxford Comma
suggestion

"Total pelvic exenteration is most commonly performed to treat rectal cancer. Less often cervical, vaginal, prostate or bladder cancers are treated using this technique as well as locally advanced pelvic sarcoma."

Line 2:119 · Use the Oxford comma in 'vaginal, prostate or bladder'.

"Resection includes the rectum, urinary bladder and internal reproductive organs (prostate/seminal vesicles in males; and uterus, ovaries and vagina in females). At the time of the procedure, an ileal conduit and end colostomy are formed."

Line 3:125 · Use the Oxford comma in 'uterus, ovaries and vagina'.
Semicolons
suggestion

"Resection includes the rectum, urinary bladder and internal reproductive organs (prostate/seminal vesicles in males; and uterus, ovaries and vagina in females). At the time of the procedure, an ileal conduit and end colostomy are formed."

Line 3:119 · Use semicolons judiciously.