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"Physiological vacuum phenomena can occur and are quite frequently seen in the intervertebral disc within the scope of ageing, or in any joint where distractive forces or a wide range of movement are involved including the glenohumeral, acromioclavicular, sternoclavicular, sacroiliac, hip, knee, ankle, wrist or temporomandibular joints 3."

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Oxford Comma
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"Physiological vacuum phenomena can occur and are quite frequently seen in the intervertebral disc within the scope of ageing, or in any joint where distractive forces or a wide range of movement are involved including the glenohumeral, acromioclavicular, sternoclavicular, sacroiliac, hip, knee, ankle, wrist or temporomandibular joints 3."

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"Vacuum phenomena can also migrate into adjacent structures of a disc, joint or bone and can then be found for example within the epidural space, where they have been reported to lead to pneumatic nerve root compression 14 or in a sleeve of a nerve due to nerve root avulsion 15."

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There Is
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"There are no specific clinical symptoms unless they are associated with rare specific complications e.g. pneumatic nerve root compression."

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