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Lint: whipple-disease-thoracic-manifestations-1

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suggestion

"Majority of patients present with non-specific pulmonary and general symptoms like a chronic non-productive cough, pleuritic chest pain, dyspnoea, progressive weight loss, anorexia, malaise, arthralgia and intermittent fever."

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Oxford Comma
suggestion

"Majority of patients present with non-specific pulmonary and general symptoms like a chronic non-productive cough, pleuritic chest pain, dyspnoea, progressive weight loss, anorexia, malaise, arthralgia and intermittent fever."

Line 5:186 · Use the Oxford comma in 'malaise, arthralgia and intermittent'.

"CT may reveal basal infiltrates, soft tissue nodules, mediastinal and hilar lymphadenopathy."

Line 19:49 · Use the Oxford comma in 'nodules, mediastinal and hilar'.