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"The term oedema was coined on MRI as the signal in abnormal bone marrow is similar to that seen with excess water; low T1, high T2. The term is, however, misleading as "oedema" implies that there is only excess fluid, whereas in reality, within areas of so-called bone marrow oedema, a wide variety of processes can exist, including infarction, haemorrhage, inflammatory cell infiltration, fibrosis, and hypervascularity 6."

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"primary: bone marrow oedema syndrome (no cause found)"

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"infective: e.g. osteomyelitis, diskitis, septic arthritis"

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"neoplastic: malignancies e.g. bone metastases, and benign e.g. giant cell tumour, chondroblastoma, osteoid osteoma"

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"The concept of bone marrow oedema as an entity detectable by magnetic resonance imaging is due to the pioneering work 7 of AJ Wilson et al. in 1988. The authors specifically interpreted these changes in MRI signal intensity as an increase in free water content in the bone marrow "interstitium"."

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"The term oedema was coined on MRI as the signal in abnormal bone marrow is similar to that seen with excess water; low T1, high T2. The term is, however, misleading as "oedema" implies that there is only excess fluid, whereas in reality, within areas of so-called bone marrow oedema, a wide variety of processes can exist, including infarction, haemorrhage, inflammatory cell infiltration, fibrosis, and hypervascularity 6."

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"The term oedema was coined on MRI as the signal in abnormal bone marrow is similar to that seen with excess water; low T1, high T2. The term is, however, misleading as "oedema" implies that there is only excess fluid, whereas in reality, within areas of so-called bone marrow oedema, a wide variety of processes can exist, including infarction, haemorrhage, inflammatory cell infiltration, fibrosis, and hypervascularity 6."

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"There is a long (long) list of possible causes of this finding:"

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