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Lint: chronic-periaortitis-2

Headings Spacing
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"FDG-PET "

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Isotope Notation
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"PET scan and PET-CT with 18F-fluorodeoxyglucose (FDG) is a reliable tool for assessing the metabolic activity of the mass: in early inflammatory stages the uptake is avid, in the late fibrotic stage there might be no uptake."

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List Punctuation
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"immunosuppressive drugs such as Azathioprine and Methotrexate have been used effectively as steroid-sparing agents and in patients unresponsive to steroids alone."

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Acronyms
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"Elevated ESR is seen in 80-90% of patients."

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List Caps
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"Cyclophosphamide may be useful in severe cases (if vasculitis is present)"

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Associations"

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"FDG-PET "

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"Treatment"

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"Medical"

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"Surgical"

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"Prognosis"

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Commas
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"Common symptoms include dull, diffuse back/abdominal/flank pain (80%), with other symptoms including fever, weight loss, anorexia, vomiting, malaise, claudication, testicular pain, and/or renal colic."

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Semicolons
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"isolated periaortitis: non-aneurysmal form of chronic periaortitis; less frequently encountered"

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"with CE-CT the periaortic mass usually shows varying degree of enhancement; the degree of enhancement correlates with the activity of the fibrotic process"

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"in malignancy the fibrosis has a tendency to be larger and bulkier; the sensitivity and specificity of morphologic features are rather poor"

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Oxford Comma
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"in chronic disease, little or no enhancement may be seen"

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There Is
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"steroids are usually effective in chronic periaortitis but their role remains somewhat controversial. There is no accepted standard for dose and duration of steroid treatment"

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