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Lint: hivaids-genitourinary-manifestations-1

Acronyms
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"vascular causes of renal disease: renal artery stenosis due to dyslipidaemia related to ART or HIV itself"

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Oxford Comma
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"renal diseases related to opportunistic infections: CMV, tuberculosis and MAC infections, fungal infections, pneumocystis carinii infection"

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"nephrotoxicity due to medication used to treat infections (e.g. amphotericin, cotrimoxazole)"

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