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Lint: moguls-of-the-heart

Oxford Comma
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"expanded in ectasia, aneurysm or hypertension"

Line 9:20 · Use the Oxford comma in 'ectasia, aneurysm or hypertension'.
Commas
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"other causes include cardiac aneurysm, pericardial cyst, coronary artery aneurysm, mediastinal tumour, pericardial defect, sinus of Valsalva aneurysm, and dilated right ventricular outflow tract"

Line 24:52 · More than 5 commas in a single sentence might make it more difficult to read.
Semicolons
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"The right cardiomediastinal border is relatively smooth; the right atrium forms the right heart border, convexity at the right tracheobronchial angle is formed by the azygos vein, and a dilated or tortuous ascending aorta can displace the superior vena cava in a long arc."

Line 42:59 · Use semicolons judiciously.
Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 43:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>The term is derived from the German word mugel which means mound, and was popularised by <strong>M Daves</strong> '