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"the pump: the heart"

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"the tank: the lungs"

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"the pipes: the vessels"

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Acronyms
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"The rapid ultrasound in shock (RUSH) protocol is a structured point-of-care ultrasound (POCUS) examination performed at the time of presentation of a shocked patient. It is a more detailed and longer exam than the FAST scan, with the aim to differentiate between hypovolaemic, cardiogenic, obstructive and distributive shock."

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"The rapid ultrasound in shock (RUSH) protocol is a structured point-of-care ultrasound (POCUS) examination performed at the time of presentation of a shocked patient. It is a more detailed and longer exam than the FAST scan, with the aim to differentiate between hypovolaemic, cardiogenic, obstructive and distributive shock."

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"the pump: the heart"

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"the tank: the lungs"

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"the pipes: the vessels"

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"Features seen in hypovolaemic shock include:"

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"Features seen in cardiogenic shock include:"

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"Features seen in obstructive shock include:"

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"Features seen in distributive shock include:"

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  • H1 Clinical information
  • H1 Protocol
  • H1 Normal appearance
  • H1 Approach
  • H1 Related pathology
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 Summary

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"The rapid ultrasound in shock (RUSH) protocol is a structured point-of-care ultrasound (POCUS) examination performed at the time of presentation of a shocked patient. It is a more detailed and longer exam than the FAST scan, with the aim to differentiate between hypovolaemic, cardiogenic, obstructive and distributive shock."

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"The protocol includes assessment of the 'pump, tank and pipes' 1:"

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