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Adjectival Hyphens
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"post-surgery"

Line 66:8 · Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'post-surgery'.
Acronyms
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"in the UK, caution is now advised in using quinolones in high-risk patients 14"

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Associations"

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"Complications"

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There Is
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"Thoracic aortic aneurysms are a type of thoraco-abdominal aneurysm. They are much less common than abdominal aortic aneurysms (0.16% vs 4%) 17. There is a wide range of causes, and the ascending aorta is the segment most commonly affected. Both CT-angiography and MR-angiography are the modalities of choice to image this condition."

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"Most commonly occur in the 50 to 60-year-old age group with an estimated incidence of ~7.5 per 100,000 patient-years 8. There is a male predominance (M:F is 3:1)."

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Oxford Comma
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"Thoracic aneurysms are often incidental findings on chest imaging. They may present symptomatically if large enough to cause mass effect on the airway, oesophagus or pulmonary vasculature. Alternatively, they may present due to a complication, including rupture, dissection, aorto-bronchial or aorto-oesophageal fistulae."

Line 9:148 · Use the Oxford comma in 'airway, oesophagus or pulmonary'.
Semicolons
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"ascending aorta: cystic medial degeneration (with or without a connective tissue disorder) is the dominant pathological mechanism; hypertension is a contributing risk factor rather than a primary aetiology in isolation 20,22"

Line 26:137 · Use semicolons judiciously.
Commas
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"Mild to moderate aneurysmal dilatation can usually be treated conservatively and monitored. When the diameter reaches ≥5 cm, intervention is usually considered as the risk of rupture is significantly elevated, although exact thresholds vary depending on the guidelines, segment of aorta involved, risk of treatment, and rate of growth (≥10 mm/year or ≥5 mm/6 months) 1,18,19."

Line 95:127 · More than 5 commas in a single sentence might make it more difficult to read.
Inline EG
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"open repair (e.g. elephant graft repair)"

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