Radiopaedia Helpers

Adjectival Hyphens

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"post-carotid endarterectomy"

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Headings Spacing

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"Ultrasound "

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Strong List Colon Position

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"MRA: vascular narrowings can be seen (see DSA)"

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"DWI: watershed infarcts can be seen"

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"perfusion/ASL: in the acute phase (≤30 days) there may be reduced global and regional CBF, which normalise by ~2 weeks after headache onset and remain normal in the remission phase (≥90 days); posterior regions show the most marked recovery ²³"

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List Punctuation

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"aneurysmal subarachnoid haemorrhage."

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Ranges

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"RCVS affects women more commonly than men (F:M = 2.4:1) and usually presents between 20-50 years of age (mean 42 years), although it has also been described in children and adolescents ¹⁷. The mean age of presentation in men is a decade younger than the mean age of presentation in women."

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Acronyms

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"In 2016, a study proposed a set of criteria to diagnose reversible cerebral vasoconstriction syndrome and to distinguish it from primary angiitis of the central nervous system (PACNS) with a specificity of 98-100% and a similarly high PPV ⁷:"

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"Transcranial Doppler may show increased arterial velocities suggesting vasospasm and decreased luminal calibre of ICA, MCA, and ACA ⁸. Bedside ultrasound has been used for the follow-up of vasospasm ⁹."

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"perfusion/ASL: in the acute phase (≤30 days) there may be reduced global and regional CBF, which normalise by ~2 weeks after headache onset and remain normal in the remission phase (≥90 days); posterior regions show the most marked recovery ²³"

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List Caps

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"International Headache Society International Classification of Headache Disorders 3 (ICHD-3) criteria ¹⁰"

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Strong

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"variable patterns of sulcal enhancement have been described¹²"

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Headings Valid

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Expected headings

H1 Terminology
H1 Usage
H1 Epidemiology
H2 Risk factors
H2 Associations
H1 Clinical presentation
H2 Complications
H1 Diagnosis
H2 Diagnostic criteria
H2 Diagnostic clues
H1 Pathology
H2 Aetiology
H2 Location
H2 Classification
H2 Macroscopic appearance
H2 Microscopic appearance
H2 Immunophenotype
H2 Markers
H2 Genetics
H1 Radiographic features
H2 Plain radiograph
H2 Mammography
H2 Antenatal ultrasound
H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
H2 Ultrasound
H2 CT
H3 Dual-energy CT
H2 Angiography (DSA)
H2 MRI
H2 CT/MRI
H2 Nuclear medicine
H3 PET-CT
H3 PET-MRI
H1 Radiology report
H1 Treatment and prognosis
H2 Complications
H1 History and etymology
H1 Differential diagnosis
H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
H1 Practical points
H1 See also

"Ultrasound "

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"Complications"

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Oxford Comma

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"Headaches may be associated with photophobia, nausea and vomiting. Focal neurological deficits can occur, secondary to ischaemia or convexity subarachnoid haemorrhage. CSF studies are normal or near normal."

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"In a minority of patients, ischaemia and stroke can occur²¹."

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Semicolons

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"perfusion/ASL: in the acute phase (≤30 days) there may be reduced global and regional CBF, which normalise by ~2 weeks after headache onset and remain normal in the remission phase (≥90 days); posterior regions show the most marked recovery ²³"

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Commas

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"Vessel wall MRI (VW-MRI) may be a useful adjunct to conventional MRI, allowing differentiation between RCVS, where there is no or mild contrast enhancement of the affected arterial wall, and other causes of vascular narrowing, such as vasculitis, where there is intense contrast enhancement of the affected arterial wall, or intracranial atherosclerotic plaques, which focally demonstrate contrast enhancement ¹⁶."

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Biographical Lifespan

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"History and etymology"

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