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Lint: transcatheter-mitral-valve-intervention

Adjectival Hyphens
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"Long-term and post-procedural complications include 14,15:"

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"post-procedural atrial septal defect"

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"Pre-procedural imaging"

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"Pre-procedural imaging includes a qualitative and quantitative assessment of mitral regurgitation to assure the indication of the procedure and to determine the underlying aetiology (degenerative or functional) 16."

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"Post-procedural imaging"

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"Pre-procedural evaluation"

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"The radiological report of a pre-interventional evaluation will depend on the planned procedure and should include a description of the following 5,16,19:"

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"Post-procedural evaluation"

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"mitral valvular competence, including trans-mitral gradient"

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Acronyms
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"The first transcatheter edge-to-edge repair was performed in 2003 and has been approved in Europe in 2008 and in the US in 2013 6,7,23."

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"The first transcatheter mitral valve replacement system was implanted in 2012 and approved for use in Europe in 2020. Transcatheter mitral valve-in-valve and valve-in-ring options are approved in Europe and the US."

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Strong
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"Transcatheter mitral valve repair devices can be categorised by target region, including the mitral valve leaflets, mitral annulus, chordae tendineae, and the left ventricle 1-5."

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Prefix Hyphens
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"Peri-procedural or short-term complications include 3,14,15:"

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"Peri-procedural imaging"

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Indications
  • H1 Contraindications
  • H1 Preprocedural evaluation
  • H1 Procedure
  • H2 Equipment
  • H2 Technique
  • H2 Postprocedural care
  • H1 Postprocedural evaluation
  • H2 Radiographic features
  • H1 Complications
  • H1 Outcomes
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 See also

"Structural requirements"

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"Transcatheter edge-to-edge repair"

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"Indirect mitral annuloplasty"

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"Direct mitral annuloplasty"

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"Chordal repair or replacement"

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"Left ventricular repair"

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"Transcatheter mitral valve replacement"

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"Valve-in-valve or valve-in-ring implantation"

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"Access route"

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"Radiographic features"

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"Pre-procedural imaging"

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"Echocardiography"

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"CT"

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"Peri-procedural imaging"

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"Post-procedural imaging"

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"Radiology report"

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"Pre-procedural evaluation"

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"Post-procedural evaluation"

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"Outcome"

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Semicolons
suggestion

"Transcatheter mitral annuloplasty devices have been approved in Europe since 2011; the first technique was an indirect mitral annuloplasty. Direct annuloplasty techniques gained approval in Europe in 2015 7."

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Commas
suggestion

"The procedure requires a collaborative multidisciplinary team of general and interventional cardiologists, cardiac valve surgeons, cardiac anaesthetists, heart failure specialists and imaging experts with appropriate expertise on the subject, including valvular heart disease, heart failure, electrophysiology and advanced cardiac imaging 6,9,10."

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Oxford Comma
suggestion

"The procedure requires a collaborative multidisciplinary team of general and interventional cardiologists, cardiac valve surgeons, cardiac anaesthetists, heart failure specialists and imaging experts with appropriate expertise on the subject, including valvular heart disease, heart failure, electrophysiology and advanced cardiac imaging 6,9,10."

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"Direct annuloplasty achieves a mitral annular diameter reduction employing direct mitral annular fastening with anchors or pledgets and allows a close approximation to the mitral valve 11,12. Depending on the device, the access route is transvenous, transarterial or transaortic."

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"mitral leaflet morphology (thickness, mobility and grasping zone)"

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"device position, fitting and stability"

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"presence, degree and quantification of mitral regurgitation"

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"left ventricular and left atrial volumes, dimensions and function"

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"device position, fitting and stability"

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