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Lint: von-hippel-lindau-disease-5

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"vHL often presents with symptomatic haemangioblastoma in a young patient, e.g. headache, vomiting, ataxia, sensory and motor deficits or visual loss 17. Phaeochromocytoma can cause hypertension, but it is often non-functioning."

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Emphasis
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"A germline variant in the VHL tumour suppressor gene (chromosome 3p25-26) encodes the VHL protein, part of a complex that degrades hypoxia-inducible factor alpha (HIFα), which is a driver of abnormal cell proliferation, angiogenesis, and tumour formation 17. Inheritance is autosomal dominant with high expressivity and penetrance, though disease requires somatic inactivation of the remaining wild-type allele. Approximately 80% of cases occur via this pathway, with ~20% arising de novo 10,15."

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"A germline variant in the VHL tumour suppressor gene (chromosome 3p25-26) encodes the VHL protein, part of a complex that degrades hypoxia-inducible factor alpha (HIFα), which is a driver of abnormal cell proliferation, angiogenesis, and tumour formation 17. Inheritance is autosomal dominant with high expressivity and penetrance, though disease requires somatic inactivation of the remaining wild-type allele. Approximately 80% of cases occur via this pathway, with ~20% arising de novo 10,15."

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"Most lesions from vHL are treatable and surveillance is recommended with various regional guidelines 10. Some experts advocate routine screening starting in adolescence. Belzutifan, an HIF-2α inhibitor, can be used for patients with CNS and/or retinal haemangioblastomas and RCC in VHL disease that do not require immediate surgery 15,17."

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"Most lesions from vHL are treatable and surveillance is recommended with various regional guidelines 10. Some experts advocate routine screening starting in adolescence. Belzutifan, an HIF-2α inhibitor, can be used for patients with CNS and/or retinal haemangioblastomas and RCC in VHL disease that do not require immediate surgery 15,17."

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  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Abdominopelvic"

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"Urogenital"

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"CNS"

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"Head and neck"

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Oxford Comma
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"can be simple, complex or cystic renal cell carcinoma 10"

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Semicolons
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"cerebellar (~60%; range 44-72%); spinal cord (~30%; range 13-50%) - most commonly in the cervical and thoracic cord; brainstem (~12.5%; range 10-25%)"

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"cerebellar (~60%; range 44-72%); spinal cord (~30%; range 13-50%) - most commonly in the cervical and thoracic cord; brainstem (~12.5%; range 10-25%)"

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"cerebellar (~60%; range 44-72%); spinal cord (~30%; range 13-50%) - most commonly in the cervical and thoracic cord; brainstem (~12.5%; range 10-25%)"

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"cerebellar (~60%; range 44-72%); spinal cord (~30%; range 13-50%) - most commonly in the cervical and thoracic cord; brainstem (~12.5%; range 10-25%)"

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"cerebellar (~60%; range 44-72%); spinal cord (~30%; range 13-50%) - most commonly in the cervical and thoracic cord; brainstem (~12.5%; range 10-25%)"

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"peritumoural cysts of CNS haemangioblastomas are due to increased vascular permeability which outstrips the resorptive capacity of the surrounding brain; the cysts often grow much faster than the tumour"

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"bilateral in 30% 10; considered pathognomonic for vHL 9"

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"type 2 vHL: high risk for phaeochromocytoma; some VHL protein function retained"

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"type 2A: high-risk for phaeochromocytoma; low-risk for renal cell carcinoma"

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