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Lint: ataxia-telangiectasia-1

Biographical Date Spacing
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"The condition was first described in 1941 by Denise Louis-Bar (1914-1999), a Belgian neuropsychiatrist 11."

Line 32:49 · In a biographical citation, the date should be correctly spaced: '<strong>Denise Louis-Bar </strong>(1914'
Acronyms
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"In less severe cases, termed "ataxia-telangiectasia variants", there is retention of some ATM kinase activity due to either expression of very low levels of normal ATM protein (from splice site mutations) or expression of mutant ATM (from missense mutations) 4."

Line 17:94 · 'ATM' has no definition. Spell it out if it's unfamiliar to the audience.

"In less severe cases, termed "ataxia-telangiectasia variants", there is retention of some ATM kinase activity due to either expression of very low levels of normal ATM protein (from splice site mutations) or expression of mutant ATM (from missense mutations) 4."

Line 17:168 · 'ATM' has no definition. Spell it out if it's unfamiliar to the audience.

"In less severe cases, termed "ataxia-telangiectasia variants", there is retention of some ATM kinase activity due to either expression of very low levels of normal ATM protein (from splice site mutations) or expression of mutant ATM (from missense mutations) 4."

Line 17:233 · 'ATM' has no definition. Spell it out if it's unfamiliar to the audience.
EG List And
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"there is an increased incidence of malignancy (e.g. bowel, pancreatic ductal adenocarcinoma 12, and breast cancer)"

Line 29:55 · An e.g. list gives selected examples, so it should not end with 'and' or 'or': 'e.g. bowel, pancreatic ductal adenocarcinoma 12, and'.
Emphasis
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"The condition was first described in 1941 by Denise Louis-Bar (1914-1999), a Belgian neuropsychiatrist 11."

Line 32:137 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>.</em>'
List Caps
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"Friedreich ataxia"

Line 37:11 · In general, we don't start a list item with a capital letter. Exceptions are proper nouns.
Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Complications"

Line 26:1 · "Complications" is under the wrong parent heading (found under "Treatment and prognosis").
There Is
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"There is no cure and treatment consists of supportive measures."

Line 25:4 · Don't start a sentence with 'There is'.
Inline EG
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"there is an increased incidence of malignancy (e.g. bowel, pancreatic ductal adenocarcinoma 12, and breast cancer)"

Line 29:54 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.