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Strong List Colon Position
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"T2: high signal 3,10,11,13,18"

Line 67:4 · When enboldening an intro, the colon should not be bold. '<strong>T2:</strong> high'

"T1: usually demonstrates reduced signal in regions of T2 high signal, although some areas of hyperintensity can be seen, as can some enhancement post-gadolinium administration"

Line 79:8 · When enboldening an intro, the colon should not be bold. '<strong>T1:</strong> usually'

"DWI: in the acute setting high diffusion signal may be evident (so-called 'stroke-like' lesions)"

Line 80:8 · When enboldening an intro, the colon should not be bold. '<strong>DWI:</strong> in'
Adjectival Hyphens
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"T1: usually demonstrates reduced signal in regions of T2 high signal, although some areas of hyperintensity can be seen, as can some enhancement post-gadolinium administration"

Line 79:170 · Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'post-gadolinium'.
Emphasis
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"MT-ND genes (e.g. MT-ND5) which encode for complex I"

Line 42:8 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>MT-ND</em> genes (e.g. <em>MT-ND5</em>'
Acronyms
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"reduced NAA"

Line 86:19 · 'NAA' has no definition. Spell it out if it's unfamiliar to the audience.
List Caps
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"Wernicke encephalopathy"

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Commas
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"Leigh syndrome, also known as subacute necrotising encephalomyelopathy (SNEM), is a mitochondrial disorder characterised by progressive neurodegeneration, mitochondrial dysfunction, and bilateral central nervous system lesions, that invariably leads to death, usually in childhood."

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"There is no disease-modifying therapy available 10,18, although a 'mitochondrial cocktail' is often prescribed, variably consisting of components such as thiamine (vitamin B1), coenzyme Q-10, riboflavin (vitamin B2) and vitamin C 14,15,18. Generally, medications which are mitochondrial toxins (e.g. sodium valproate) should be avoided 15."

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There Is
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"Leigh syndrome is rare, encountered in approximately 1 in 40,000 births, although some populations have much higher incidence (e.g. in Quebec in Canada) 9. There is no known gender or racial predilection 9."

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"There is no disease-modifying therapy available 10,18, although a 'mitochondrial cocktail' is often prescribed, variably consisting of components such as thiamine (vitamin B1), coenzyme Q-10, riboflavin (vitamin B2) and vitamin C 14,15,18. Generally, medications which are mitochondrial toxins (e.g. sodium valproate) should be avoided 15."

Line 91:4 · Don't start a sentence with 'There is'.
Oxford Comma
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"Less commonly, there is involvement of organs beyond the central nervous system, including cardiac, gastrointestinal and renal manifestations 11,13. Hypertrichosis has been described in some patients specifically with a SURF1 mutation 18."

Line 31:95 · Use the Oxford comma in 'cardiac, gastrointestinal and renal'.
Biographical Lifespan
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"History and etymology"

Line 100:1 · A bold element in the History and etymology section should be a person; it would be useful to have their lifespan details: '<h4>History and etymology</h4> <p>It is named after <strong>Archibald Denis</strong> '
Inline EG
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"other mitochondrial disorders (e.g. MEGDEL syndrome)"

Line 114:41 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.

"toxic encephalopathies (e.g. carbon monoxide poisoning)"

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