Login
Toggle sidebar

Lint: progressive-ataxia-and-palatal-tremor

Adjectival Hyphens
error

"Progressive ataxia and palatal tremor may be sporadic or familial 1-3. The aetiopathogenesis of sporadic progressive ataxia and palatal tremor has not been fully elucidated, but there is typically no lesion to the triangle of Guillain and Mollaret (dentatorubro-olivary pathway) 1-3. It has been postulated that there may be a neurodegenerative basis, and multiple studies have identified pathological evidence of tau deposition in the inferior olives in affected patients post-mortem 1."

Line 39:513 · Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'post-mortem'.
Acronyms
warning

"Familial progressive ataxia and palatal tremor is often seen in the context of other broader syndromes with genetic basis, such as Alexander disease, certain spinocerebellar ataxias, coeliac disease, and POLG-related disorders 1-3."

Line 40:232 · 'POLG' has no definition. Spell it out if it's unfamiliar to the audience.
Inline EG
suggestion

"upper motor neurone signs (e.g. spasticity, weakness)"

Line 31:34 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.

"movement disorders (e.g. parkinsonism, dystonia, chorea)"

Line 32:27 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.