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Lint: renal-angiomyolipoma

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"Patients may present with numerous other symptoms and signs 2, e.g. palpable mass, flank pain, urinary tract infections, haematuria, renal failure, or hypertension 3."

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"Angiomyolipomas are members of the perivascular epithelioid cells tumour group (PEComas) and are composed of variable amounts of three components; blood vessels (-angio) lacking elastic tissue, plump spindle cells (-myo), and adipose tissue (-lipo)."

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"Angiomyolipomas are members of the perivascular epithelioid cells tumour group (PEComas) and are composed of variable amounts of three components; blood vessels (-angio) lacking elastic tissue, plump spindle cells (-myo), and adipose tissue (-lipo)."

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"mTOR inhibitors (e.g. everolimus) have been shown to significantly decrease AML size in both TSC and sporadic cases, particularly the highly vascularised fat-poor component, with dramatic reduction in the size of the arteries and aneurysms thereby reducing the risk of haemorrhage and renal impairment 30. Side effects can be significant."

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  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

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"Digital subtraction angiography (DSA)"

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"The remaining 20% are associated with phakomatoses, the vast majority in the setting of tuberous sclerosis. Angiomyolipomas are found in 25-50% of tuberous sclerosis patients 23. They have also been described in the setting of von Hippel-Lindau syndrome (vHL) and neurofibromatosis type 1 (NF1) 5,7. In these cases, they present earlier (usually identified by the age of 10 years), are larger, and are far more numerous. They are more likely to be fat-poor, which accounts for their earlier presentation 2,6,7. They have also been associated with lymphangioleiomyomatosis (LAM) 20."

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"Angiomyolipomas are members of the perivascular epithelioid cells tumour group (PEComas) and are composed of variable amounts of three components; blood vessels (-angio) lacking elastic tissue, plump spindle cells (-myo), and adipose tissue (-lipo)."

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"Patients may present with numerous other symptoms and signs 2, e.g. palpable mass, flank pain, urinary tract infections, haematuria, renal failure, or hypertension 3."

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"Angiomyolipomas are members of the perivascular epithelioid cells tumour group (PEComas) and are composed of variable amounts of three components; blood vessels (-angio) lacking elastic tissue, plump spindle cells (-myo), and adipose tissue (-lipo)."

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"The cornerstone of diagnosis in all modalities is the demonstration of macroscopic fat; however, in the setting of haemorrhage, or when lesions contain little fat, it may be difficult to distinguish an angiomyolipoma from a renal cell carcinoma."

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"presence of a large vessel extending into the renal cortex suggestive of AML; liposarcoma is hypovascular"

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