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"Other roughly synonymous monikers (i.e. equivalent to massive) include "severe," "life-threatening," or "major" haemoptysis. Regardless of terminology, the majority of classification systems largely attempt to dichotomize patients into those with a high degree of mortality requiring rapid intervention and those with a lower degree of acuity and expected short term morbidity and mortality."

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"Other roughly synonymous monikers (i.e. equivalent to massive) include "severe," "life-threatening," or "major" haemoptysis. Regardless of terminology, the majority of classification systems largely attempt to dichotomize patients into those with a high degree of mortality requiring rapid intervention and those with a lower degree of acuity and expected short term morbidity and mortality."

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"Infection and acute or chronic inflammation of the lower respiratory tract accounts for the majority of cases of haemoptysis; the most common entities include acute and chronic bronchitis, pneumonia, and pulmonary tuberculosis (TB). Malignancy is implicated in a significant percentage of cases, with primary lung cancer cited as the aetiology in between 5 to 44% of patients 13."

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"Roughly 514% of patients will meet the variable criteria for "massive" or "life-threatening" haemoptysis, with a somewhat different epidemiology; the most common aetiologies include bronchiectasis, TB, invasive fungal infections (e.g. mycetoma), necrotising infections, and neoplasms 14. In highly endemic areas tuberculosis may account for up to 85% of cases 15."

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"Massive haemoptysis is a term commonly used in the aforementioned, with definitions based upon criteria such as volume of blood expectorated per cough and/or rate of production, with some proposed systems additionally utilising physiologic modifiers, such as 15:"

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  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Approach to haemoptysis"

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"Approach to massive haemoptysis"

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"Infection and acute or chronic inflammation of the lower respiratory tract accounts for the majority of cases of haemoptysis; the most common entities include acute and chronic bronchitis, pneumonia, and pulmonary tuberculosis (TB). Malignancy is implicated in a significant percentage of cases, with primary lung cancer cited as the aetiology in between 5 to 44% of patients 13."

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"Roughly 5–14% of patients will meet the variable criteria for "massive" or "life-threatening" haemoptysis, with a somewhat different epidemiology; the most common aetiologies include bronchiectasis, TB, invasive fungal infections (e.g. mycetoma), necrotising infections, and neoplasms 14. In highly endemic areas tuberculosis may account for up to 85% of cases 15."

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"In 90% of cases the bronchial arteries are the source of bleeding; as branches of the descending thoracic aorta they are subject to the systemic (i.e. high-pressure arterial) blood pressure 12. Other less common potential sources of bleeding include:"

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"This approach can be followed for small amounts of blood or streaks of blood in sputum. The underlying cause can be life-threatening; however, it is not an emergency."

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"collateral vessels derived from a variety of adjacent mediastinal/thoracic vasculature 11 (e.g. subclavian artery, intercostal arteries, internal thoracic artery)"

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"development may be promoted by a chronic inflammatory milieu in the respiratory tract (e.g. elaboration of VEGF)"

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"transtracheal interventions (e.g. diagnostic aspiration, anaesthesia)"

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"airway protection, optimisation of oxygenation and ventilation, circulatory support with consideration of pharmacologic haemostatic adjuncts (e.g. coagulopathy reversal)"

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"Optimal management involves a team of multiple specialties with important facets of the initial approach to stabilisation, diagnosis and management including the following:"

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