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"imaging features suggestive of the diagnosis include an apical wall thickness ≥15 mm and a ratio of apical to basal wall thickness > 1.5"

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"characterised by systolic dysfunction (LV-EF < 50%)"

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"septal to inferolateral wall thickness ratio > 1.3"

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"any myocardial segment with an unexplained wall thickness > 15 mm"

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"a peak gradient (4 x peak velocity 2) of < 30 mmHg is unlikely to be hemodynamically significant"

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Approximation Spacing
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"septal and other segments hypertrophy but sparing the apex ~ 16%"

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"apical segments along with any other segment hypertrophy ~ 27%"

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"apical hypertrophy alone ~ 13%"

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Citation Preceding Space
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"sigmoid septal hypertrophy14"

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Acronyms
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"The electrocardiogram is abnormal in over 95% of cases; the most common abnormalities include high precordial QRS voltages, secondary repolarisation abnormalities (ST-segment depression, T wave inversion), left axis deviation, and deep, narrow so-called "needle-like" Q waves, typically in leads I, L, V5 and V6."

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"The electrocardiogram is abnormal in over 95% of cases; the most common abnormalities include high precordial QRS voltages, secondary repolarisation abnormalities (ST-segment depression, T wave inversion), left axis deviation, and deep, narrow so-called "needle-like" Q waves, typically in leads I, L, V5 and V6."

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Emphasis
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"MYBPC3 (myosin binding protein): 30%-40%, chromosome 11"

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"MYH7 (myosin heavy chain): 20%-30%, chromosome 14"

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"TNNT2 (cardiac muscle troponin): ~10%, chromosome 1"

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"TNNI3 (troponin I type 3): ~7%, chromosome 19"

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"MYL2 (myosin light chain 2): ~4%, chromosome 12"

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"MYL3 (myosin light chain 3): ~2%, chromosome 3"

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"TPM1 (tropomyosin 1): ~1%, chromosome 15"

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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Subtypes"

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"Associations"

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"Echocardiography"

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"Doppler echocardiography"

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"Prognosis"

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There Is
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"There is a slight male prevalence, and it is present in 1 out of 500 in the general population, probably remaining undiagnosed and asymptomatic in the majority of affected individuals 15."

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Semicolons
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"The electrocardiogram is abnormal in over 95% of cases; the most common abnormalities include high precordial QRS voltages, secondary repolarisation abnormalities (ST-segment depression, T wave inversion), left axis deviation, and deep, narrow so-called "needle-like" Q waves, typically in leads I, L, V5 and V6."

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"Hypertrophic cardiomyopathy is characterised by left ventricular hypertrophy (wall thickness >12-15 mm; normal wall thickness is 12 mm or less, measured during diastole) without obvious aetiology. Associated right ventricular hypertrophy may be seen in 15-17% of cases."

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"second most common variant; characterised by diffuse left ventricular wall thickening with an associated decrease in left ventricular cavity size"

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"LVOT obstruction is present in 70% of cases 12; it is defined as a gradient >30 mmHg"

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Commas
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"The electrocardiogram is abnormal in over 95% of cases; the most common abnormalities include high precordial QRS voltages, secondary repolarisation abnormalities (ST-segment depression, T wave inversion), left axis deviation, and deep, narrow so-called "needle-like" Q waves, typically in leads I, L, V5 and V6."

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Oxford Comma
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"The electrocardiogram is abnormal in over 95% of cases; the most common abnormalities include high precordial QRS voltages, secondary repolarisation abnormalities (ST-segment depression, T wave inversion), left axis deviation, and deep, narrow so-called "needle-like" Q waves, typically in leads I, L, V5 and V6."

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"Spectral Doppler modalities are useful in the evaluation of the type, severity and anatomic location of obstruction:"

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Inline EG
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"morphologic variations involving the mitral valvular apparatus (e.g. papillary muscles)"

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"avoidance of factors exacerbating the degree of obstruction such as intense exercise, hypovolaemia, and certain medications (e.g. vasodilators, positive inotropes)"

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"While the majority of patients with hypertrophic cardiomyopathy have a normal life expectancy, significant morbidity and mortality may occur secondary to heart failure and sudden cardiac death. Mortality typically occurs from ventricular dysrhythmias (e.g. ventricular fibrillation)."

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"echocardiographic features may include valvular structural abnormalities (e.g. calcification, decreased leaflet mobility), pulsed wave Doppler localising obstruction to the valve, and a continuous wave Doppler envelope consistent with fixed obstruction (parabolic rise with an earlier peak)"

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Parentheses
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"patients with (or at high risk of) ventricular dysrhythmias and the attendant risk of sudden cardiac death (SCD) may be managed with pharmacologic (i.e. anti-arrhythmic medications) measures or placement of an implantable cardioverter-defibrillator (ICD) 20"

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