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Adjectival Hyphens
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"post-starvation refeeding syndrome"

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Biographical Name
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"An unrecognised nutrient on the surface of rice which was eliminated during the polishing process was speculated to be the nutritional factor deficient in beriberi in 1901 by Gerrit Grijns (1865-1944). The structure of thiamine was defined by Robert R Williams (1886-1965) and colleagues in 1934, and in 1936 was demonstrated in an avian model to reverse the metabolic derangement in aerobic glucose utilisation present in thiamine deficiency."

Line 106:179 · In a biographical citation, the name should be formatted correctly: '<strong>Gerrit Grijns</strong> (1865-1944). The structure of thiamine was defined by <strong>Robert R Williams</strong> (1886'
List Caps
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"Shoshin beriberi 3: severe acute wet form with high mortality"

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Wet beriberi"

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"Dry beriberi"

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There Is
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"There are two main forms:"

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Semicolons
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"Confirmatory testing may include a whole blood thiamine level or an erythrocyte transketolase activity; the latter may be reassessed after thiamine repletion."

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"The imaging features of beriberi reflect its underlying manifestations, and therefore, in wet beriberi, cardiomegaly, pulmonary oedema, and dilated cardiomyopathy may be seen; however, there are no pathognomonic cardiac imaging findings 5."

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Commas
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"The imaging features of beriberi reflect its underlying manifestations, and therefore, in wet beriberi, cardiomegaly, pulmonary oedema, and dilated cardiomyopathy may be seen; however, there are no pathognomonic cardiac imaging findings 5."

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