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Lint: osteoarthritis-of-the-shoulder

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"higher BMI / obesity"

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EG List And
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"In addition to the visualisation of glenoid and humeral head morphology, MRI can help in the detection of the underlying aetiology. It allows the assessment of a variety of tissue abnormalities, including cartilage, labrum and the glenohumeral ligaments. The capacity in the detection of cartilage injury is, however, limited if compared to other joints (e.g. knee, hip or ankle) 4. In exchange, it provides valuable information in the evaluation of the rotator cuff, which forms an integral part of surgical planning."

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  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"MRI"

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Oxford Comma
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"Typical symptoms include slowly progressive, posterior or deep, localised shoulder pain associated with a limited range of motion, stiffness, and worsening at night. Other symptoms might include locking, grinding and joint instability 3."

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"Typical symptoms include slowly progressive, posterior or deep, localised shoulder pain associated with a limited range of motion, stiffness, and worsening at night. Other symptoms might include locking, grinding and joint instability 3."

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"Generally, osteoarthritis is characterised by progressive joint alteration, due to a combination of mechanical, inflammatory and metabolic factors that not only affect the hyaline cartilage but also the surrounding tissues, including the subchondral bone, the joint capsule and the synovium, as well as the ligaments and, in the case of the shoulder, the rotator cuff. These alterations are thought to arise from an imbalance between destruction and repair of the affected tissues 3,5. Like in other diarthrodial joints, glenohumeral osteoarthritis is associated with thickening of the subchondral bone plate and marginal osteophyte formation, which usually can be seen at the posterior glenoid rim and the central part of the humeral head first. Soft tissue changes associated with the condition are capsular thickening and contraction, potentially leading to an internal rotation deficit and further eccentric posterior glenoid erosion 3."

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"In addition to the visualisation of glenoid and humeral head morphology, MRI can help in the detection of the underlying aetiology. It allows the assessment of a variety of tissue abnormalities, including cartilage, labrum and the glenohumeral ligaments. The capacity in the detection of cartilage injury is, however, limited if compared to other joints (e.g. knee, hip or ankle) 4. In exchange, it provides valuable information in the evaluation of the rotator cuff, which forms an integral part of surgical planning."

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"rotator cuff pathology, in particular, massive and full-thickness rotator cuff tears and subscapularis tears"

Line 78:36 · Use the Oxford comma in 'particular, massive and full'.

"Non-operative management includes patient education, lifestyle and activity modifications and physical therapy as well as pain management with paracetamol and nonsteroidal anti-inflammatory drugs."

Line 83:46 · Use the Oxford comma in 'education, lifestyle and activity'.
Commas
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"Generally, osteoarthritis is characterised by progressive joint alteration, due to a combination of mechanical, inflammatory and metabolic factors that not only affect the hyaline cartilage but also the surrounding tissues, including the subchondral bone, the joint capsule and the synovium, as well as the ligaments and, in the case of the shoulder, the rotator cuff. These alterations are thought to arise from an imbalance between destruction and repair of the affected tissues 3,5. Like in other diarthrodial joints, glenohumeral osteoarthritis is associated with thickening of the subchondral bone plate and marginal osteophyte formation, which usually can be seen at the posterior glenoid rim and the central part of the humeral head first. Soft tissue changes associated with the condition are capsular thickening and contraction, potentially leading to an internal rotation deficit and further eccentric posterior glenoid erosion 3."

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