Login
Toggle sidebar

Lint: vexas-syndrome

Spacing
error

"VEXAS syndrome is caused by somatic (acquired) mutations, typically missense mutations, to the UBA1 gene in haematopoietic progenitor cells of the erythroid and myeloid lineages 1-3. The UBA1 gene is encoded on the X chromosome and escapes X inactivation in females, which is why it is almost exclusively seen in males 1-3, and only seen in females in the context of monosomy X 5. UBA1 encodes for the E1 enzyme, a ubiquitin activating enzyme, which when defective in haematopoietic progenitor cells leads to activation of the innate immune system, and thus, autoinflammatory clinical manifestations 1-3. Certain UBA1 mutations may be associated with specific phenotypes, for example, p.Met41Leu variants are associated with Sweet syndrome, and p.Met41Val variants are associated with vasculitic dermatological lesions and less associated with chondritis 9."

Line 59:776 · 'p.M' should have one space.

"VEXAS syndrome is caused by somatic (acquired) mutations, typically missense mutations, to the UBA1 gene in haematopoietic progenitor cells of the erythroid and myeloid lineages 1-3. The UBA1 gene is encoded on the X chromosome and escapes X inactivation in females, which is why it is almost exclusively seen in males 1-3, and only seen in females in the context of monosomy X 5. UBA1 encodes for the E1 enzyme, a ubiquitin activating enzyme, which when defective in haematopoietic progenitor cells leads to activation of the innate immune system, and thus, autoinflammatory clinical manifestations 1-3. Certain UBA1 mutations may be associated with specific phenotypes, for example, p.Met41Leu variants are associated with Sweet syndrome, and p.Met41Val variants are associated with vasculitic dermatological lesions and less associated with chondritis 9."

Line 59:843 · 'p.M' should have one space.
Units
error

"VEXAS syndrome is caused by somatic (acquired) mutations, typically missense mutations, to the UBA1 gene in haematopoietic progenitor cells of the erythroid and myeloid lineages 1-3. The UBA1 gene is encoded on the X chromosome and escapes X inactivation in females, which is why it is almost exclusively seen in males 1-3, and only seen in females in the context of monosomy X 5. UBA1 encodes for the E1 enzyme, a ubiquitin activating enzyme, which when defective in haematopoietic progenitor cells leads to activation of the innate immune system, and thus, autoinflammatory clinical manifestations 1-3. Certain UBA1 mutations may be associated with specific phenotypes, for example, p.Met41Leu variants are associated with Sweet syndrome, and p.Met41Val variants are associated with vasculitic dermatological lesions and less associated with chondritis 9."

Line 59:781 · Put a space between the number and the unit in '41L'.
Acronyms
warning

"ANCA-associated vasculitis (rare)"

Line 34:11 · 'ANCA' has no definition. Spell it out if it's unfamiliar to the audience.
Emphasis
warning

"VEXAS syndrome is caused by somatic (acquired) mutations, typically missense mutations, to the UBA1 gene in haematopoietic progenitor cells of the erythroid and myeloid lineages 1-3. The UBA1 gene is encoded on the X chromosome and escapes X inactivation in females, which is why it is almost exclusively seen in males 1-3, and only seen in females in the context of monosomy X 5. UBA1 encodes for the E1 enzyme, a ubiquitin activating enzyme, which when defective in haematopoietic progenitor cells leads to activation of the innate immune system, and thus, autoinflammatory clinical manifestations 1-3. Certain UBA1 mutations may be associated with specific phenotypes, for example, p.Met41Leu variants are associated with Sweet syndrome, and p.Met41Val variants are associated with vasculitic dermatological lesions and less associated with chondritis 9."

Line 59:99 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>UBA1</em> gene in haematopoietic progenitor cells of the erythroid and myeloid lineages <sup>1-3</sup>. The <em>UBA1</em> gene is encoded on the X chromosome and escapes X inactivation in females, which is why it is almost exclusively seen in males <sup>1-3</sup>, and only seen in females in the context of <a>monosomy X</a> <sup>5</sup>. <em>UBA1</em>'
Commas
suggestion

"VEXAS (vacuoles, E1 enzyme, X-linked, autoinflammatory, somatic) syndrome is a severe, treatment-refractory, monogenic, multiorgan, autoinflammatory condition with vasculitic and haematological complications."

Line 1:27 · More than 5 commas in a single sentence might make it more difficult to read.

"VEXAS syndrome has an incredibly varied clinical presentation 9. Overall, the most common symptoms are dermatological (~80%), constitutional (~70%), respiratory (~60%), musculoskeletal (~50%), ocular (~40%), chondritis (~40%), and haematological (~40%) 9. Broadly, these clinical manifestations may be broadly divided into inflammatory and haematological:"

Line 5:87 · More than 5 commas in a single sentence might make it more difficult to read.
Inline EG
suggestion

"skin inflammation (e.g. panniculitis)"

Line 16:26 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.

"dyspnoea (e.g. due to alveolitis, organising pneumonia)"

Line 17:17 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.

"ocular inflammation (e.g. orbital inflammation, episcleritis, scleritis, uveitis, optic perineuritis)"

Line 18:28 · Consider replacing a bracketed e.g. with an inline e.g. after a comma.