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Lint: msa-p

Adjectival Hyphens
error

"unexplained voiding difficulties with post-void residual at least 100 mL (for clinically established MSA) or of any volume (for clinically probable or possible prodromal MSA)"

Line 120:49 · Only use medical adjectival hyphens where the letters at the end and start of the compound word are the same, e.g. post-transplant. In this case, don't use the hyphen: 'post-void'.
En Dash
error

"rate of atrophy in measuring the anteriorposterior pons: -0.87 mm/year (highly specific but not very sensitive)"

Line 160:49 · Use a hyphen-minus ('-') instead of an en-dash ('–').
Hybrid Imaging Slash
error

"On dopamine transporter brain imaging with I-123 ioflupane SPECT/CT, there is loss of the normal comma- or crescent-shaped tracer uptake in the striatum. Instead, a period- or oval-shaped uptake is seen within the caudate nucleus head, without tracer uptake in the putamen. Quantitative assessment reveals reduced uptake in the putamen compared with norms."

Line 187:70 · Hybrid imaging takes a hyphen, not a slash: 'SPECT/CT'.
Emphasis
warning

"The most robust genetic associations involve SNCA and COQ2 gene variants, though these show population-specific patterns 17."

Line 13:49 · Italics should be used only in exceptional circumstances: '<em>SNCA</em>'
Litotes
warning

"While autonomic dysfunction is a common clinical feature in MSA, it is not necessarily universal 15. Indeed, one study found that ~40% of patients did not have autonomic dysfunction initially, and a small proportion (8%) never developed autonomic dysfunction with long-term follow-up 15."

Line 128:166 · Consider using 'lack(s)' instead of 'not have'
Semicolons
suggestion

"motor features: rapid disease progression, postural instability, severe speech impairment, or severe dysphagia, each within 3 years of motor onset; levodopa induced craniocervical dystonia; Babinski sign; myoclonic jerks or kinetic tremor; or postural deformities"

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"motor features: rapid disease progression, postural instability, severe speech impairment, or severe dysphagia, each within 3 years of motor onset; levodopa induced craniocervical dystonia; Babinski sign; myoclonic jerks or kinetic tremor; or postural deformities"

Line 36:196 · Use semicolons judiciously.

"motor features: rapid disease progression, postural instability, severe speech impairment, or severe dysphagia, each within 3 years of motor onset; levodopa induced craniocervical dystonia; Babinski sign; myoclonic jerks or kinetic tremor; or postural deformities"

Line 36:211 · Use semicolons judiciously.

"motor features: rapid disease progression, postural instability, severe speech impairment, or severe dysphagia, each within 3 years of motor onset; levodopa induced craniocervical dystonia; Babinski sign; myoclonic jerks or kinetic tremor; or postural deformities"

Line 36:246 · Use semicolons judiciously.