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Adjectival Hyphens
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"Unlike acute disseminated encephalomyelitis (ADEM), tumefactive demyelinating lesions are usually not post-infective. Additionally, although patients with multiple sclerosis can develop large tumefactive demyelinating plaques (which have very similar appearances - see tumefactive multiple sclerosis), patients who present with a solitary tumefactive demyelinating lesion infrequently go on to develop multiple sclerosis (MS) 3."

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List Caps
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"Baló-like"

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"Marburg variant of multiple sclerosis"

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Acronyms
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"the pattern can otherwise be indistinguishable from that of neoplasms (decreased NAA/Cr ratio, increased Cho/Cr ratio, and variable lactate and lipid peaks)"

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"high-grade glioma (e.g. GBM)"

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Headings Valid
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Expected headings

  • H1 Terminology
  • H1 Usage
  • H1 Epidemiology
  • H2 Risk factors
  • H2 Associations
  • H1 Clinical presentation
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 Diagnosis
  • H2 Diagnostic criteria
  • H2 Diagnostic clues
  • H1 Pathology
  • H2 Aetiology
  • H2 Location
  • H2 Classification
  • H2 Macroscopic appearance
  • H2 Microscopic appearance
  • H2 Immunophenotype
  • H2 Markers
  • H2 Genetics
  • H1 Radiographic features
  • H2 Plain radiograph
  • H2 Mammography
  • H2 Antenatal ultrasound
  • H2 Transoesophageal echocardiography
  • H2 Ultrasound
  • H2 CT
  • H3 Dual-energy CT
  • H2 Angiography (DSA)
  • H2 MRI
  • H2 CT/MRI
  • H2 Nuclear medicine
  • H3 PET-CT
  • H3 PET-MRI
  • H1 Radiology report
  • H1 Treatment and prognosis
  • H2 Complications
  • H1 History and etymology
  • H1 Differential diagnosis
  • H2 Clinical differential diagnosis
  • H1 Practical points
  • H1 See also

"Signal characteristics"

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"Video"

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Inline EG
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"Patients present with symptoms atypical for multiple sclerosis, such as focal neurologic deficits, seizures, and/or aphasia 5. Most do not progress to multiple sclerosis 6. In some instances, patients can deteriorate rapidly and succumb to illness (e.g. acute malignant Marburg variant of MS)."

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"high-grade glioma (e.g. GBM)"

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"tumefactive demyelination is not necessarily benign, and patients can have a fulminant course ending in demise (e.g. Marburg variant of MS)"

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Parentheses
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"inflammatory: multiple sclerosis (and variants, including acute malignant Marburg variant of MS, Schilder type of MS, Baló concentric sclerosis), systemic lupus erythematosus, neurosarcoidosis, Sjögren disease, neuro-Behçet disease, neuromyelitis optica spectrum disorder (NMOSD), myelin oligodendrocyte glycoprotein​ antibody-associated disease (MOGAD), acute disseminated encephalomyelitis (ADEM) 12,14"

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Commas
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"inflammatory: multiple sclerosis (and variants, including acute malignant Marburg variant of MS, Schilder type of MS, Baló concentric sclerosis), systemic lupus erythematosus, neurosarcoidosis, Sjögren disease, neuro-Behçet disease, neuromyelitis optica spectrum disorder (NMOSD), myelin oligodendrocyte glycoprotein​ antibody-associated disease (MOGAD), acute disseminated encephalomyelitis (ADEM) 12,14"

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